passingbuzzards: Elf with sunglasses, smiling. (simple)
trell ([personal profile] passingbuzzards) wrote in [community profile] onepiece_ficathon 2015-12-26 06:27 am (UTC)

OH MAN i am just BLOWN AWAY by this

damn near everyone gets them wrong honestly but you get them really right and this is FANTASTIC, thank you you so much!! what a wonderful thing to find

i love that you touch on law feeling guilty for keeping luffy alive when his brother didn't make it (I FEEL STRONGLY ABOUT THIS) and i love the connections you make between what's happened to them both, as well as how raw your descriptions of law's memories of the white city are. god. and the paragraphs describing luffy's physical state as a result of everything he's put himself through and law's reaction are just stunning, undoubtedly my very favorite part

and "Law refuses to be an ember."! i love

you even used the latin for 'first, do no harm,' my HERO, thank you again for such a great fill :')))

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